Bronwen's Grading Response

Great job Laura! You've done an excellent job getting a wide range of information. I have just a few suggestions on who to make your blog even better. One, on your fourth and part of you 5th notes posts, I can't tell if your notes are a list or just really choppy paragraphs. If you're going for the list, try bulleting its somehow. And two, I don't like who in your response to article number 4 you put yourself down. This is your topic, if you want to be an "annoying activist that tries to persuade people to being Eco-friendly" then do that!! In this case, you will sound more passionate than annoying! Go at this full-force, don't back off for fear of coming off as annoying! Your supposed to be annoying because you really want to get people to listen to you and pay attention to your topic! Fabulous job, and DON'T BACK DOWN!! =D