Jamien's 2nd Response to Laura

Laura,
Your research is very strong and informal. I can tell that you are including may opposing viewpoint in your blog to make it more interesting. There are many viewpoints on global warming that are quite false, while others make sense and are true. Your are doing a great job including interactive videos to bring your blog to life. Your color coding and citation are well done. Your responses are very thoughtful and creative. I can tell your are trying to prove a point in your research that global warming is very important, and that we as humans need to take action to stop it. You are finding great informal articles that deepen your research for the better. You may want to interview someone who is highly educated in global warming. Keep up the EXCELLENT work.

Jamien

Maddy's Second Response

Your blog is great. It's good to see you building a strong foundation for your research on climate change. I applaud your choice to pick an article that completely denies global warming as an issue. It's good to understand what some people think, even if that information is so against your beliefs. I do have one suggestion, however; could your writing be a little cleaner? I found some of your responses a little hard to follow. Some more sentence variety could keep the entry flowing.

Keep up the good work!

Malcolm's Second Response

I enjoyed reading your thoughts and idea on a "hot" subject (HAHAHA! global WARMING...HOT...Get it?). I thought that some infor mation from your first article was kind of ironic in that carbon trifluoride used for cleaning solar panels that are supposed to lower emissions by providing clean energy was actually harmful to the environment. I also enjoyed reading the information on your third article, it is always nice to see an opposing viewpoint on something that usually just seems to be a one sided arguement. All in all, good articles and responses.

Olivia H's Second Response

Wow Laura! I agree with you on that last article, he did seem ignorant. Sea walls protecting us? What about the places that all ready have sea walls??? Your notes were amazing and your responses in depth! Keep going!